I was reviewing a post on my technology blog and saw an ad that had me concerned:
Under investigation? When these words are used they connote something negative; as in things are being investigated for their validity or because of faulty circumstances. I would have never stated that this new procedure is under investigation. There are probably a dozen ways of relaying this message in a more positive fashion. Let's try!
Under investigation? When these words are used they connote something negative; as in things are being investigated for their validity or because of faulty circumstances. I would have never stated that this new procedure is under investigation. There are probably a dozen ways of relaying this message in a more positive fashion. Let's try!
- New Procedure Being Explored
- New Procedure Underway
- New Procedure Presents Successful Results
- New Procedure on the Horizon
- New Procedure Promotes Positive Remediation
- New Procedure Provides a New Hope
Ok, so I only came up with half-a-dozen. Still, there is probably a better way of describing this new study and procedure!
Whatchu think?
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